Pattern Recognition

My story with a twist involving time travel is now on the shortish story page.

Spring and all

Yawning, awoken
By Spring sunshine, gambolling
Lamb-like back to life.

Midnight creeps in. Click.
All day anticipated,
Tick, message seen, hit!

Room seven. Half past
Ten. Precious embryo of
Last class together.

Catherine

Haiku: Murder Mystery

"Who did this to you?"
The stabbing victim's finger
points. He says, "It was..."

Title not chosen yet

Further adventures on the continent now available on Steph's page.

Peter and the Witch

A part of the story I might present to Sara for end of term and not the schoolboy and the bootlegger.
 I think I posted it ok... let me know if not!

Hellish Nell

A new character is born - read the opening of Hellish Nell on Catherine's page.

Criticism

The dictionary defines criticism as
n    noun
1    the expression of disapproval of someone or something based on perceived faults or mistakes.
2    the critical assessment of a literary or artistic work.

I have put up a new page for your critisism - please refer to definition 2 when writing.

If you put the title and the page you found the writing on as a heading that would be helpful

We call it the Water Planet

Dolphins, dancing and doom - with footnotes. Find out more in the flash fiction section.