Is this taken from personal experience maybe? I noticed that Helen quickly turned into Nell - is there a connection or is the Hellish one simply taking over? Very interesting peek into the female psyche and the phenomenon of trophy wives. You create a nice air of mystery about your secondary character that makes us want to know more about her. Can you really tell that much from the type of bra she's wearing? There's a whole area of research here that needs further investigation.
Is this taken from personal experience maybe? I noticed that Helen quickly turned into Nell - is there a connection or is the Hellish one simply taking over? Very interesting peek into the female psyche and the phenomenon of trophy wives. You create a nice air of mystery about your secondary character that makes us want to know more about her. Can you really tell that much from the type of bra she's wearing? There's a whole area of research here that needs further investigation.
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ReplyDeleteLiked it! Very acidic: a literary style fit for purpose. Deep insights about the shallow end. Nice ending....