Love the idea that Mother Benedictus...'was not a street fighter.' The authorial voice here is taking on a distinctive character of its own. The detail about the inner workings of the convent is impressive, but it might be a touch too much for the casual reader if it wasn't tempered with these little snippets of almost tongue in cheek humour. The second creepy thing has happened, so the pace is quickening nicely.
Love the idea that Mother Benedictus...'was not a street fighter.' The authorial voice here is taking on a distinctive character of its own. The detail about the inner workings of the convent is impressive, but it might be a touch too much for the casual reader if it wasn't tempered with these little snippets of almost tongue in cheek humour. The second creepy thing has happened, so the pace is quickening nicely.
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